A Rose for Emily: An Analysis of Style


A Rose for Emily: An Analysis of Style

The excerpt vividly captures the mood at the funeral of Miss Emily, a reclusive spinster whose death the narrator mentions at the beginning of the short story. It is a foreshadowing technique present throughout the entire story. The paragraph has two sentences that are completely different, with the first being a simple sentence that reflects the relationship of the few remnants of a once noble family that can generously be described as a sense of duty and tolerance. This sentence is an example of use of figurative language, in this case visual imagery, which is evident throughout the work.
Despite the family having fallen on hard times, the funeral witnesses ‘the town coming to look at Miss Emily’, more figurative language that captures the status befitting Miss Emily. The personification of the many mourners as ‘the town’ that comes ‘to look’ because of respect and curiosity befits the status of the monumental woman. Even the portrait of Emily’s father is at the funeral, a ‘crayon face… musing profoundly above the bier’. This personification of the metaphor reflects the relationship between father and daughter, with the proud father seemingly regretting having dismissed all her daughter’s suitors.

The ladies at the funeral are ‘sibilant and macabre’. Apart from reflecting the prevailing mood at the funeral, this onomatopoeic rhetoric is a metaphor for the hushed life of the reclusive lady. The town’s ladies various attempts to help haughty Emily are shunned. And so they have nothing else to say or do for Emily but attend her funeral with feelings of this onomatopoeia for ‘the dance of death’. The ‘sibilant and macabre’ atmosphere accompanies the mourners when they later knock down one of the rooms in Emily’s house.

There are also very old men at the funeral whose mood is captured in the rest of the paragraph. Some wear “Confederate uniforms’ which metaphorically describes Emily’s lifespan, the period covered in the story glimpsing three critical phases of the deceased woman’s life. These men are ‘on the porch and lawn’, where nearly all men who have visited Emily’s house have ended. They are ‘talking of Miss Emily as if she had been a contemporary of theirs’, a simile that introduces the comparison between Miss Emily and men.

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But could the romanticizing old men be delusional in their thinking as captured in the metaphor ‘confusing time with its mathematical progression’? These men have not only lost their sense of time, they have simply lost their senses to imagine romantic situations that never happened. The metaphor further explains the deluded relationship between Miss Emily and men throughout her life; from Colonel Sartoris who deluded the town that Emily needed not pay taxes, the judge who was deluded to send men to her house, the men deluded they were discreetly working under cover of darkness, her father deluded that Emily was too good for men who came to betroth her, the men deluded they would marry her, the authorities deluded they would coax Emily to pay her taxes, and Homer Barron deluded to his death.  

The narrator gives a clue as to what is to follow in the phrases that follow, ‘as the old do, the past is not a diminishing road but, instead, a huge meadow which no winter ever quite touches, divided from them now by the narrow bottleneck of the most recent decade of years.’ This metaphorically describes the experience of the aged that the past is not to be forgotten, but is a well of experience to be imbibed from. People only peep into the recent past through ‘a narrow bottleneck’ and so the townsfolk were attending Emily’s funeral because of respect and curiosity yet her life and death were a miserable indictment on certain societal values and trends. 

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Faulkner’s story has detailed description for vivid recall as reflected in the funeral scene.  This is aided by strong imagery as reflected in such phrases as ‘beneath a mass of bought flowers’, ‘crayon face musing profoundly above the bier’ and ‘danced with her and courted her”.

Whereas the second sentence in the paragraph is a complex-compound sentence, it is easily understandable because of the syntactical structure of the work that adds rhythm and balance. The clauses, which are separated by commas, are made up of simple, short words.
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Works cited

William Faulkner. “A Rose for Emily.” The Harbrace Anthology of Short Fiction. 4th ed. Ed. Jon C. Stott, Raymond E. Jones, and Rick Bowers. Toronto: Nelson, 2006. 187-194. Print.

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